Jessica, The second drawing is your best of these. The forms are overall too rubbery and overworked, though. Don't be apprehensive to describe form in terms of a more angular transition (knees and elbows in the last pose, for instance). You should work on drawing from your shoulder, too. It will make your structural lines straighter. Shoe me ALL the drawings you do in a session, in your subsequent posts. I'm suspecting you need to draw a lot more in your sessions.
Jessica,
ReplyDeleteThe second drawing is your best of these. The forms are overall too rubbery and overworked, though. Don't be apprehensive to describe form in terms of a more angular transition (knees and elbows in the last pose, for instance).
You should work on drawing from your shoulder, too. It will make your structural lines straighter.
Shoe me ALL the drawings you do in a session, in your subsequent posts. I'm suspecting you need to draw a lot more in your sessions.